#82- daybreak

photo by B. Fritz

changing of the guard

melodic night frogs retire

trilling birds arise

honored by award

singled out among poems

opportunity

I nominate mindlovemisery for requiem

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19 Comments

Filed under haiku, micropoetry, poetry

19 responses to “#82- daybreak

  1. smart Haiku…

    Happy Rally.

  2. This is awesome! The juxtaposition from night to day, and the comparison of changing from night to morn, flows very well. The words are tight, none wasted, with strong imagery of the sunrise. The mention of the guards uses the underlying metaphor of nature’s participation matching man’s need to participate in his own life, guard nature, and stop to “watch the sunrise” exuding well from the poetry. Well done!

  3. Leo

    Beautiful.. To express such a thought in vivid imagery like this, hats off to you..! Thanks for visiting my blog. I like your haikus a lot. I’ve subscribed to your email updates and will come by whenever I can 🙂

    PS: If you’re interested, you could stop by at Haiku Heights, it is a weekly meme I host for haiku lovers 🙂

  4. You can feel the dawn come up.

  5. wow, this is really good. i like the imagery here, using frogs & birds to represent night & daybreak. and the photo complements the whole work. 🙂

  6. That is an incredible haiku, I love how you invoke so many sense simultaneously divine. Congrats on your award, well-deserved! Thank you so much for the nomination

  7. beautiful and serene and succinct.

  8. Nice Haiku. It was a pleasure to read.

  9. Powerful communication about nature and it’s opposite forces….in very beautiful poetic content.

  10. Wow – thank you so much!

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