flowing through my hands
impossible to hold on
this moment in time
Filed under haiku, haiku heights, senryu
Tagged as haiku, life, October, senryu, time
I find it frustrating that we can’t hold on to THIS moment! 🙂
but if you wrote about it, then you have held on to it….so it wasn’t impossible
Brilliant!!! Probably the only thing really impossible ~~
Hold on a bit more! But it has flowed through. Impossible indeed.
Excellent use of prompt. Great Haiku.
Melanie, Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
WoW! What a thought, if only we could stop time!
I really like your haiku and the images it evokes – time flowing = perfect
Thank you so much I very much appreciate your comments!
wonderful truth. sad but just cant be changed.
A lovely haiku.
There are times when you wish you could just freeze time.
Beautiful and well said!! Time and tide waits for no one!!
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